Writing Analysis

Strongest Post: Modernizers October 19, 2011
Weakest Post: Fashion Perspective October 9, 2011

Analyze Your Writing:
1. What is working?
I think what works in my blog writing style is the very detailed descriptions and conversational tone. Both elements hopefully make my topic a little more relatable, or at least more bearable to read.

2. What isn't working?
What isn't working in my writing style is how I sometimes ramble and go off topic, my occasional use of second person, and my inability to find relatable evidence to support my claims.

3. What do you want to improve in the next 6 weeks?
In the next six weeks, I would like to advance my overall writing style, make it more concise, and find products that match the runway looks I post to make the whole blog more effective.

4. What steps will you take to make that happen?
To improve my writing, I will read more fashion websites that have advanced writing such as the New York Times' Style section and prestigious magazines' websites. I will also edit or at least proofread my posts, and look through online stores to find products that match my runway posts.